Christina Eickenroht AP UNITED STATES HISTORY 2010 SCORING GUIDELINES The time period between 1870 and 1910 is usually referred to as the Gilded Age. Analyze how applicable this title is to the social, economic, and political trends of the time period. The 8-9 Essay Contains a well-developed thesis that examines the ways in which the Gilded Age applies to the time period in social, economic, and political trends. Presents an effective analysis of the social, economic, and political trends of the time and how they reflect the era s title. o References to the social, economic, and political trends may be implicit, yet should still be clear. Effectively uses a substantial number of documents. Supports thesis with substantial and relevant outside information. May contain minor errors. Is clearly organized and well written. The 5-7 Essay Contains a thesis that addresses the ways in which the title the Gilded Age applies to the time period in social, economic, and political trends. Has some limited analysis of the social, economic, and political trends during this time period and how they reflect it s title. o References to the trends may be implicit; may only address two of the three trends. Effectively uses some documents. Supports thesis with some relevant outside information. May have errors that do not seriously detract from the quality of the essay. Shows acceptable organization and writing; language errors do not interfere with the comprehension of the essay. The 2-4 Essay Contains a limited or underdeveloped thesis. Deals with the question in a general manner; simplistic treatment of social, economic, and political trends and how they support the title, the Gilded Age. May address only one category. Merely refers to, quotes, or briefly cites documents. Contains little outside information, or information that is inaccurate or irrelevant. May have major errors. May be poorly organized and/or written.
The 0-1 Essay Contains no thesis or a thesis that does not address the question. Exhibits inadequate or incorrect understanding of the question. Has little or no understanding of the documents, or ignores them completely. Has numerous errors. Written so poorly that it inhibits understanding -- blank or completely off task
UNITED STATES HISTORY SECTION II Part A (Suggested writing time 45 minutes) Percent of Section II score 45 Directions: The following question requires you to construct a coherent essay that integrates your interpretation of Documents A-J and your knowledge of the period referred to in the question. High scores will be earned only by essays that both cite key pieces of evidence from the documents and draw on outside knowledge of the period. 1. The time period between 1870 and 1910 is usually referred to as the Gilded Age. Analyze how applicable this title is to the social, economic, and political trends of the time period. Document A Source: Boss Murphy and Civic Progress from The Nation We cannot shut our eyes to the fact that no Tammany boss was ever as secure as Charles Murphy when he died; nor that there is endless graft and inefficiency, and doubtless grave corruption, in many of the bureaus of the municipality. We cannot hide the sad truth that the anti-tammany forces are utterly without leadership; that not one man whose voice can reach and move the multitude is today making front against government by and for Tammany Hall Pun, political influence, and the power of money reigned supreme We are conscious, of course, that much of this improvement lies in externals; that underneath there are still infinite wrongs, waste, extravagance, thieving Let no one be deceived. Government by Tammany Hall remains a crime against the American democracy. As long as it survives it menaces every municipal government under the Stars and Stripes.
Document B Document C Source: The Bosses of the Senate, Puck
Document D Source: The Gilded Age original book cover; published 1873 Document E Source: The Dangerous Classes of New York and Twenty Years Among Them by Charles Loring Brace, 1872 There are thousands on thousands in New York who have no assignable home, and "flit" from attic to attic, and cellar to cellar; there are other thousands more or less connected with criminal enterprises; and still other tens of thousands, poor, hard-pressed, and depending for daily bread ou the day's earnings, swarming in tenement-houses, who behold the gilded rewards of toil all about them, but are never permitted to touch them.
Document F Source: Tweed Days in St. Louis, Lincoln Steffens, 1902 Business men were not mere merchants and the politicians were not mere grafters; the two kinds of citizens got together and wielded the power of banks, railroads, factories, the prestige of the city, and the spirit of its citizens to gain business and population a change occurred. Public spirit became private spirit, public enterprise became private greed. Document G Source: A Call to Action, James B. Weaver, 1892 If the master builders of our civilization one hundred years ago had been told that at the end of a single century, American society would present such melancholy contrasts of wealth and poverty, of individual happiness and widespread infelicity as are to be found to-day throughout the Republic, the person making the unwelcome prediction would have been looked upon as a misanthropist, and his loyalty to Democratic institutions would have been seriously called in question. Document H Source: Wealth Essay, Andrew Carnegie, 1889 The problem of our age is the proper administration of wealth, so that the ties of brotherhood may still bind together the rich and poor in harmonious relationship. The conditions of human life have not only been changed, but revolutionized, within the past few hundred years. In former days there was little difference between the dwelling, dress, food, and environment of the chief and those of his retainers The contrast between the palace of the millionaire and the cottage of the laborer with us to-day measures the change which has come with civilization.
Document I Source: Twenty Years at Hull-House, a memoir by Jane Addams, 1910 You may remember the forlorn feeling which occasionally seizes you when you arrive early in the morning a stranger in a great city: the stream of laboring people goes past you as you gaze through the plate-glass window of your hotel, you see hardworking men lifting great burdens; you hear the driving and jostling of huge carts and your heart sinks with a sudden sense of futility You turn helplessly to the waiter and feel that it would be almost grotesque to claim from him the sympathy you crave because civilization has placed you apart, but you resent your position with a sudden sense of snobbery. Document J
AP UNITED STATES HISTORY 2010 SCORING GUIDELINES Document Information and Inferences DBQ 2010 Document A: Boss Murphy and Civic Progress Emphasizes the political corruption through political machines and city bosses City bosses were powerful and effective Discusses the Tammany Hall political machine in particular Discusses the time where greed and money were prominent in politics Points out that underneath the virtual prosperity of the time was corruption The corruption of the time was a cause and result of the industrial development The importance of immigrants in being a cheap labor source and a target/power base of city bosses Extravagant wealth and waste of the time External improvement and prosperity masking the underlying poverty, unequal distribution of wealth, and corruption The power of money the concept of greed leading to corruption Document B: Map of U.S. Steel Company A map of the U.S. Steel Company s many firms that it incorporated Shows that much of the country s steel production was concentrated in the northeast around Ohio and Pennsylvania Geographically demonstrates the vast control of big business U.S. Steel is an example of a monopoly that began to absorb its competition Industrial production during the Gilded Age was concentrated toward the eastern and especially northeastern regions of the country Trusts and other forms of industrial management were required due to these giant monopolies Vertical and horizontal integration; undercutting competitors Massive industrial production Immigrants, particularly those in the northeast, provided a major source of labor; other available skilled and unskilled labor Laissez-faire led to few restrictions on big business, which allowed for monopolies to form
Document C: The Bosses of the Senate, Puck A political cartoon demonstrating the power of trusts trusts dominating senators Shows the various industries that controlled the senate of the time (sugar, oil, coal, etc.) senate of the monopolists for the monopolists -the power of trusts in comparison to the power of government the people s entrance is closed; the entrance for monopolists is open government not working for public will but for private greed and big business Political corruption and monopolies through trusts The greed of the era that led to corruption, trusts, and monopolies Monopolies and trusts controlled prices, wages, trade, etc. Laissez-faire philosophy Political cartoons speaking out against corruption/big business (another political cartoonist is Thomas Nast) Trusts were cumbersome Trusts were a way to aid in business management bankers/financiers (ex. J.P. Morgan) Soon the anti-trust movement led to reforms during and after Progressive era Document D: The Gilded Age book cover, 1873 This is the book cover of Mark Twain s The Gilded Age: A Tale of Today Published in 1873 Criticism of the Gilded Age society, politics, and economy Mark Twain coined the term the Gilded Age to reflect the underlying issues of the time Twain was a political satirist and commentator on society and life of the time The Gilded Age was not a time of complete prosperity; the prosperity and industrial boom of the time covered/masked the underlying issues Muckraking and satire show people who sought to uncover what was beneath the Gilded Age Protest against the corruption and extravagant wealth later let to reform movements Document E: The Dangerous Classes of New York, 1872
Poverty and vagrancy were prevalent in this era Not everyone achieved the prosperity of the Gilded Age many could see the benefits but did not receive them Later led to social reform and the Progressive era Unequal distribution of wealth extravagant wealth versus poverty and terrible conditions Gilded : covers underlying social issues Social Darwinism Document F: Tweed Days in St. Louis, Steffens, 1902 Corruption of government and business Individuals and big business controlled major assets of the industrial economy Lincoln Steffens was a muckraker connection to Progressive movement The gap between the extravagant wealth of those who benefited from the industrial economy versus the treatment of workers and their conditions Private greed leading to corruption Municipal political machines and city bosses (example, Boss Tweed or Tammany Hall) Document G: A Call to Action, Weaver, 1892 Uneven distribution of wealth Suggests that the corruption and social issues went against American democracy and democratic ideals Appearance of prosperity covering the underlying poverty and social gaps, particularly the gap between the rich and the poor Weaver was later a Populist party candidate Document H: Wealth, Carnegie, 1889 Uneven distribution of wealth Gap between the rich and poor Written by Andrew Carnegie
Andrew Carnegie: big business owner (Carnegie Steel Co.); robber-baron The Gospel of Wealth Carnegie and philanthropy his beliefs that the wealthy had a responsibility in philanthropy Document I: Twenty Years at Hull-House, Addams, 1910 Gap between rich and poor Jane Addams, Hull House Gilded Age covered or masked the unequal distribution of wealth and the gap between the rich and the poor; social problems underneath Jane Addams: social reformer (specifically, Hull House, which was a settlement house for social reform); against social Darwinism Some from the upper and middle classes began to feel guilt and responsibility for the social problems. This led to reform toward the end of the Gilded Age and into the Progressive era. Document J: Political Cartoon of Boss Tweed in counting there is strength corruption within political machines Boss Tweed city bosses Political cartoons as a way of protesting the Gilded Age corruption; led to pressure for political reform (muckrakers; Progressive era, etc.) the importance of immigrants in the labor source and support base for city bosses and political machines
AP UNITED STATES HISTORY 2010 SCORING GUIDELINES Document Information and Inferences DBQ 2010 Commonly Seen Relevant Outside Information robber-barons political machines monopolies trusts extravagant wealth Muckrakers Philanthropy Vertical integration Horizontal integration Laissez-faire Social Darwinism Progressive era Hull House Jane Addams Rockefeller Standard Oil Co Carnegie Carnegie Steel Co Vanderbilt Big business Tenement houses Upton Sinclair Boss Tweed Tweed Ring Tammany Hall honest graft gap between rich and poor distribution of wealth McClure s Magazine Lincoln Steffens Entrepreneurs J.P. Morgan Thomas Nast Puck Crédit Mobilier Whiskey Ring Scandals Ida Tarbell